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Amethyste wrote a new post
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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
for sake of the lesson I added punctuation…don’t get attached.
gravity slip
I stumble thru a world
that’s bent slightly outa focus
as if it were half dream,
half burn.
heat risin off my skin in waves
like quiet embers tryin
to decide if I’m worth ignitin.every breath feels wrong,
every step lands heavy,
gravity clawin up my s…Read More-
Sheer brilliance, Syr 253

You’ve mastered the heatbeat techniques of Free Verse poetry: Imagery, deeply gripping emotion, metaphor, spot-on line-breaks, seamless enjambment, syntax; and, except for the distraction of missing “g’s”, your diction and spellbinding flow would be irresistibly captivating to the senses.
Also, your well-placed…Read More
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undercurrents my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Kelly Scheppers wrote a new post
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Beautifully penned, Kelly. Excellent write my friend, loved the depth of this one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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More. Post more.
Even the light from a burning match is epic within pitch black. This is what this write of yours is.
now do a bonfire. -
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