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Read Moreacning love, blood spilled, emotions poolmy vulnerability exploited, makes me feel unlovedpeople are cruel I don't carebut when the one I love joins in I dietrust broken and crytoo different, I'm unloveable I guessstill hope plagues metelling me I...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Words are weapons and writers know how to use them, showing restraint takes self discipline. Especially against those who provoke us. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can absolutely relate to your poem, dear Crimsin. The strong wish not to hurt anybody makes sensitive people think that they have caused a conflict and are simply not lovable. Never forget that your loving heart and the power of your words are a most effective weapon and armor. Great work!
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An eye for an eye brings no satisfaction, the loss still exist and nothing can replace it. Tight
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Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Well she sounds sweet then, nice write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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Read MoreThe Shortest Distance Between Me and You is Together To write our cathedral we need a fountain pen bursting ink up our neck falling down as JFK tears across shoulder cloisters Swinging ropes of light shard resuscitate the gallows fallen. The broken patterns of sun set on nave floor, did anyone ask Lazarus if he wished...
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The title got me. The way you wove the bible in this but end it with the drink being labeled ‘What Price Salvation?’ is a damn moment. Good read
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Thank you. Seemingly, all we (as a world society) have left is salvation.
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This reminds me of the late 60s – early eighties writers. Yes, I’ve read that far back.LOL. My dad loved the old classics, while my sister came to poetry during the 70s. So I saw a great many styles and such.
Almost goes with LSD, this. Seriously! I don’t condone illegal drugs, ahem, yet in moderation many ideas have sprouted for many many writers.
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you are always too kind Mark.
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Brilliantly penned, Ghosteen. This is truly an amazing write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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And I appreciate your kind words Damian.
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
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SESSION NINE
“LA KADUTA”
Wednesday, January 7th, 2026~———————————•§•———————————~
The La Kaduta is a short, quick, fun form to compose in.
It can be about anything, leaving one’s creative side
completely open to its freewheeling whimsies.La Kaduta
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You are such a strong woman, Brenda. Many don’t hesitate to lash out and slash those wronging them. But you know the power of words. 🧡