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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Feather
A single solitary feather falls into my palm
I smile ,,,
This feather as light as it is
Made it possible to soar into the sky
To catch a current and glide
I smile ,,,
Knowing that even though I am grounded
My thoughts soar like a bird
It catches the perfect flow
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Read MoreA single solitary feather falls into my palm I smile ,,, This feather as light as it is Made it possible to soar into the sky To catch a current and glide I smile ,,, Knowing that even though I am grounded My thoughts soar like...
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Thank you, Crimsin;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Such a lovely and hopeful write my friend. Mark (Styxian) is a guy that inspires many of us and is one hell of a writer. I like this one a lot, nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, he does cuz;))
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The imagery in this one is off the chain. Especially for how simple and short it is. Brava!
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Thank you Willow;))
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Thank you Naaj;))
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Awwww. This is so heart felt and obviously I get it!
We are a community of writers. Here to encourage and inspire.
When I first encountered Mark on DUP it took me a while to leave a comment.
His work was so good and I wanted to leave a worthy comment and I was speechless!
I finally did and our friendship grew.
It makes me proud and happy to see it’s not just me:)This write is vivid for its brevity.
Just wonderful amiga:)-
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Thank you Adel. I honestly still get a little nervous about my poetry. The writing that is posted have me taken aback and rethinking if I need to work harder at this. Thank you amiga:))
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My dear Fia, we are all writers, if not poets. We are creators, builders. That puts us in good company with the better half of humanity. Hope and kindness carries much of our personal burdens for us. So much out there wants to destroy, so we huddle at our little spots and write of renewal, in so many different ways. It really does help build our strengths, our character.
I don’t think it is a matter of working harder. I think it is more about expanding on ideas of what to write. The subjects that intrigue us, perhaps. I hope that this site continues to grow, so that we get more and more diversity of talent and expression.
You excel at this, yaknow. You have great skills for this. Because you truly do love the act of writing, yes?
We are as good as the company that we keep. You belong.-
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You are right. I will always love to write and express myself this way. The site is growing and new voices will appear. thank you Styxian;))
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Christopher are now friends
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Christopher and
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Read MoreThe day started out greatWe watched the sun rise...Our bodies clutched togetherAs we lay side by side.. You were hesitant to get up..Fondling me.. and of course I started growingYou would've played with it foreverBecause you knew where we're going.I...
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Erotic Gardener…That is a good name. Your poem gives me a subtle invitation in the beginning without saying it out right till the end what the tree was.
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Thanks.. I didn’t want to make it too blatant.
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Adds a whole new dimension to “grow-your-own” – I’ll remember your little gem next time I “grow-my-own” on the allotment!
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Awww, I’m so honored!
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Hoi hoi!
Love your poem to bits.My love and I have an allotment garden for 10 years.
But I never heard of earth day before.I planted an acer in my son’s garden on the 22nd.
What a find, this poem of yours on earth day where everything comes together
Talking bout a secret garden!
Kind regards, Gus-
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Thanks for the cool comments! 😀
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beautiful lovely Fia Styxian is a poet I admire for many reasons ❤️