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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
Fine
Very fine
Like a worm
Shirt cotton threads pull
And fray
Bare skin
Pale skin finally
Appears through the gasps
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This is exact, in that it leads the reader with a daring promise of heat, without scorching their eyes and ears with blatant words. It’s like lingerie verses naked; Make them yearn first, build the hunger.
You accomplished that well.
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Thank you, Gus. I’m glad this one met you like that. And your hunger for the next makes me smile. 🙂