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Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

lust

Poetry, Romance, Uncategorized

June 12, 2025

8

scheming lust intrudesmy body uncomfortably respondsanxious and withdrawna sexual feeling announces it will relieve stressmelancholy mixed with urgency is trickyan assailent of the mindwept vulnerability you appeal to memy thoughts answer stirring the desirea beautiful man with good intentseeking...

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7 Comments
- Pinkdreams
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I love the gentle but powerful expression in this piece.
  Favorite line: “Inside the sex storm I lose myself.” What a wonderful place to be.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    hello beautiful Pink one thank you graciously 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Damian 💕
- Fred
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Enjoyed this piece, thank you for sharing…
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    hi Fred thank you graciously 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  hello lovely Mary thank you graciously 💕
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• 1 year, 2 months ago

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Average Joe wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Meaninglessness

Poetry, Romance

June 12, 2025

4

I miss youAlmost as much as I miss me***It’s hard to use the washed out meaninglessness of wordsTo try to fill the vacuum of numbThey lay dullLike old yellow paintWithout warmth and scarce able to fill their purposeFadedEverything seems...

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4 Comments
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  hello dearest Joe love who you love and give yourself as fully as you can even if it’s just a friendship because being half there is no way to live trust me I know 💕
  - Average Joe
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Hello dear friend. There once was a time, but I survived. The wound left a scar but I healed. This was written then and is just a memory now.. Thank you for reading and caring🌼
- Alexandria
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  This is packed with so much emotion. It’s as if I could feel what you’re feeling.
  Keep moving, keep trying, don’t let anyone tell you you’re not worth it.
  Thank you for sharing this.
  - Average Joe
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you. Love is breathtaking, even in its failure. It was once a.long walk in the dark but I awoke, and now I breath again.
    I appreciate the counsel of kind words. its the simple truths that get us through.🌼
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Fred wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Silent Bloom

Poetry

June 12, 2025

4

I walked among the quiet stems, where sunlight touched the earth's hidden gems, and found a bloom, so still, so shy beneath the vast unchanging sky. It spoke no word's, yet told me all of how winds through branches call,...

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4 Comments
- DampKitten
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  That’s really nice, Fred. Love how you use rhyme and imagery.
  I’m guessing you’re into ‘silence’ by virtue of your first three poems.
  
  One thing I might suggest is organizing your piece into more traditional stanzas that emphasize your rhyme scheme as opposed to presenting the poem in a classic prose format. You can even play with spacing as such.
  
  This is a strong and thoughtful piece
  
  Meg
- Fred
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you for the kind words and sound advice Meg.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Nicely penned, Fred. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fred
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you Damian, greatly appreciated..
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