CASTLES
(A note: within this poem I have quoted from 3 poems by Pablo Neruda. They are,
‘The Stolen Branch’
‘Maybe We Have Time’
‘Poetry’
I hope all who read this poem find it enjoyable)
My Muse once said,
“Hey Red, let’s build a castle.”
A safe place for words
to run, play, or hide
and finding them,
or living through their meaning
is like an architectural myth
springing from a forested kiss.
Let’s build a castle
with a really tall turret
that reaches all the way to the sky,
so we can hold hands
while leaping to distant horizons
as we create poems in red,
or blue if you will, instead.
As long as they are new
and point to unknown
and challenging paths.
Poems that flower in
avant garde and
are harbingers of Spring.
oo0oo
“We shall climb over the wall
in the darkness of the alien garden,
two shadows in the shadow.
In the night we shall go in
up to its trembling firmament,
and your little hands and mine
will steal the stars.”
(‘The Stolen Branch’~~Pablo Neruda)
oo0oo
Let’s build a castle
where the moat is deep
with human touch
and love is not only found
in roses blown by summer wind,
under an apricot scented sky
and sunlight reflected eyes,
but also in the dusty corners
of cold, dampened rooms
and stairways
drafty with shadows,
for we need to rescue truth.
oo0oo
“Maybe we still have time
to be and to be just.
Yesterday, truth died
a most untimely death,
and although everyone knows it,
they all go on pretending.
No one has sent it flowers.
It is dead now and no one weeps.”
(‘Maybe We Have Time’~~Pablo Neruda)
oo0oo
Let’s build a castle-
stone, mortar, baked clay,
rising into the sky,
built on top of the ruins
of ‘common knowledge’.
Let our hands shape
a May day wind
blowing endless
like tears filling the ocean.
Let’s build a castle
where we can be warmed
by the hearth’s fire and the language
of words heats our hearts
and new truths spread out
like green grass
‘neath uncountable stars.
Our poems will be
like crashing waves
reshaping the rocky shores,
and like the claps of thunder
announcing life giving rain.
And in those days, years, forever…
oo0oo
“And it was at that age… poetry arrived…”
(‘Poetry’ ~~Pablo Neruda)
oo0oo
Hey Muse,
let’s build a castle.
Aztec Warrior/ redzone 10.7.08
(Further notation: ‘Poetry’ is from a collection of Neruda’s poems called
‘Isla Negra A Notebook’, 1964. Both ‘The Stolen Branch’ and ‘Maybe We Have Time’
are found in “The Captain’s Verses”, 1972)








hello dearest poet I don’t know any of the poets I’m uneducated but this is beautiful and the part that struck me let always be new I posted a couple of my underground poems from last year because I think I was a better poet then… it was an awful time in my life but it made for good poetry…thank you for showing me new old things ❤️