Ignite me
Near eternal flames
Where I can burn alive
Where the wells of mercy claim
Strike me
Make my fire blaze
Until it rests in the glow
Of a morning dreamy haze
Teach me
A heat that melts regret
If you chase the sunrise
Then I’ll catch the sunset
Burn me
Where my coldness rests
So I can feel the aching
Where the rivers in me crest
Leave me
When the fire stops
And let the waters linger
Drop
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By drop
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By drop








hello dearest Brandon this is written really well sounds like toture in the end great write ❤️
Nice to see you Crimsin. Thank you for reading
I meant torture I have trouble seeing the screen it’s so light ❤️
Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write with amazing flow and incredible wordplay my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
This was done beautifully. I like the meter of it and the breaking at the end give the reader a chance to feel between the drops.
That ending was perfection! Steam to drop…beautiful