you look at me one last time
saying goodbye with your eyes
my heart broke in the moment
our time was over
you walked the journey with me as far as you coud go
with understanding, knowing I would always love you
I carry my pain forward
open to hope closed to love
my thoughts didn’t desire anyone new
the cold of the emptiness assail me
my mind searched for you and came up lonely
beautiful tears redeem me
sacred understanding is my need of you
with goodbye on your lips you depart
my world shatter then into the dark you disappear








break ups are never easy… but with a soul like yours im sure you will find better
thank you dearest Sam this is fictional I was listening to a song yesterday by Christina Aguliera say something I’m giving up on you and this was inspired the song made me think of how I would feel if my husband said that to me I appreciate you for such a lovely comment 💕
Phenomenally penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
thank you graciously dearest Damian I love hearing your thoughts 💕