Gaze into my fire.
As blinkless as a gaze can be.
our first moment,
wordless as sleeping lips.
Our souls embraced
but bot our lips.
Glancing at you,
glancing at me.
This was a moment
between our eyes.
And with your eyes,
you’ve set my soul ablaze.
Was this truly a moment?
Gaze on into my fire.
As you looked away,
my eyes chased you unseen.
The whole theme with the eyes and fire love. She turns away and your still looking. Love it
I’m still looking at all the unrequited loves I’ve had, Fia.
I bet those eyes melt her away! Beautiful write, Daniel “)
I’ve just read your reply to Fia. Sorry for that. I can relate.I made quiet few poems of those.
But hey, unrequited love made some painfully sweet poems!
eyes chased unseen… I like this idea… nice poem Daniel
Love can hit us like a brick sometimes. I like the last two lines and how they kind of encapsulate the poem’s subject and vibe.
Well done, Daniel.
Amazing write, Daniel
Thanks 😊 I love to impress hehe