Take me by force again today.
Can’t you see how I tremble?
It hurts more, when you don’t…
When you don’t show me
I’ll abuse myself for you!
Thinking of your punishment
The firm spankings, the whip
I am a bad girl after all
The temptation to come and touch.
Kiss you like in a brutal trance.
Take me by force again today.
At the window, the floor, couch.
Everything disappears!
Extreme passion is so exciting.
Steps and movements are traced,
And “between” it’s so wet…
And in between it’s so hot,
Not cold and lonely anymore
You melt my feelings, my mind
Swiftly, slowly, cruelly!
I’ll abuse myself for you!
To feel the intense sensations
So you abuse me again…
Proving you are better at it.







Sensual and Sensational! You woke me up on a sleepy English afternoon in Essex – and how! Electrifying emphasis and use of bold font to accentuate. I’ll read it again tonight! – harriet-jacqui furl, (HJ Furl @ http://www.isittodayhjfurl.com)
I love how my words can reach out and touch you – even from afar. But your sexy, presence, with that black hair like midnight silk, and beautiful skin is making me want to touch you so much more. 😉 I want to keep you wide awake all night, making you feel every delicious shiver and spark I can send your way. Ready to get tangled in this? (and I miss the UK so much)
I’m very ready, Kristina! xx My part of the UK is missing you!
You just get sexier with every word… I don’t even know what to say… XOXO 😉
Passionately penned, Kristina. A seductive and delightful spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Oh yes, I wanted to seduce you with my words and passion so if I succeeded then that gets me excited. This poem is only the opening act; there’s so much more intense passion, desire, and dark fantasies too. If you’re ready to be teased and tangled in that, I’m more than happy to keep you there. Care to dive deeper?
You are a seductress all right. Love it
I can’t help it, I do believe in leaving a lasting impression… especially the kind you feel in the bones long after the moment’s passed. If you loved that, just know – I haven’t even gotten to the part where I whisper your name like a promise and make the pages blush yet. But maybe it’s coming. (so to speak * naughty look *)
BDSM for a vacation and a lifetime ….
BIG LIKE
Oh, now that sounds like a trip I’d pack heavy for – just ropes, a blindfold, and a wicked little smile.
BDSM for a vacation and a lifetime? You clearly know how to mix indulgence with devotion… and I have to admit, that kind of commitment deserves more than just a tease.
So thank you for the BIG LIKE but be careful. Encouraging me only guarantees the next piece will go deeper… and leave more than a few marks.
A comment like yours will me entice to book for a full week instead of just the weekend. Exquisite aftercare and then back at the indulgence of the dark side we love so much …
By all means Kx … write deeper
Mmm… a full week? Now that’s a dangerous amount of time to lose yourself completely – stripped of restraint, surrendered to every dark craving that begs to be fed.
Exquisite aftercare, yes… soft touches over skin that’s been claimed, kissed, and broken open in all the right ways. But then? Back to the edge. Back to the ache. Back to where moans turn into confessions and bruises into poetry.
You do “pinned to the wall” poetry so well…splendid in all its presentation
Pinned to the wall? that’s foreplay.
I write in ropes while gagging for it, where wrists are trembling prayers against cold brick,
and each word is a whisper laced in command. Your commands.
When I craft a line, it binds me…
So if the poetry made you want to pin me…
just imagine what the unwritten parts are doing to me. 😈
Verses for whips, and rhymes for kisses!
Well written, Kristina.
Now, You can keep them cumming. 😉
Oh my… such a naughty comment – do you always talk like that, or am I just bringing out your more… persuasive side? 😳
You say keep them cumming like it’s a challenge, but now I’m biting my lip, wondering what you guys would have me write next… or maybe how you’d have me say it.
And if you guys are going to tease me, I hope you’re ready to take responsibility – because good girls follow orders, but bad ones? Well… inspire poems. 😈 haha
Tbh, you have stepped on a gold mine.. or should I say mine field.
No rush and no pressure and no restrains when it comes to writing. Except when it comes to S&M. 😉
I like poems written from the heart, soul, subconscious..or other parts.
Yes. And YES. Both girls. My pen got it’s own mind. I am afraid to unleash it.
Oh it’s definitely a mine field. I have been stepping on those all the time it seems. My writing is always from the heart, soul, and my absolutely filthy mind. (but I can’t really post most of that now can I?) And absolutely good girl, bad girl – it’s one in the same isn’t it? So go ahead and unleash….
Hello sweet one. 🌼
Well hello, sweet artist… 🌼
You do realize you just stepped into something a little more dangerous than daisies, right?
Call me sweet again, and I just might have to prove how wicked I can be when someone nice like you tempts me with softness.
Careful – I bite… but I promise, it’s the kind of pain you’ll want to paint about later. 🎨😈
touché 🌼
Takes a bow… I bet you can really paint a girl into some compromising positions Aj. It’s the really sweet ones that have the naughtiest thoughts now isn’t it?
Apparently, yes 🌼
Who needs food when you deliver these scrumptious pieces of poetry. De-fucking-licious!
Aww, de-fucking-licious? You sure know how to make a girl squirm… 😳
But if I’m the meal, are you planning to savor me… or devour me like the starving tease you are?
Because I could behave… sit pretty, beg, and let you take your time with every bite…
But where’s the fun in that? 😈
I might wiggle, pout, maybe even gasp talk back a little, just to see how far you’d go to put me in my place. haha
right now i’m starving so I may eat you alive within minutes. Tomorrow I’ll savor you and take one bite, lick and suck with dedication and precision.
Teasing is good. My place or yours?
Oh, starving, are we? Then I’d say we’re both in danger… because the way you just said that has me aching to be devoured – fast, slow, rough, or reverent… I’d purr for every bite.. 😈
You’re popular
Are you new writing ?
Tell me more QUEEN X
Queen? Ooh… careful, you’re gonna make me blush and misbehave big time. 😳
I am writing new… letting some filthy little thoughts out to play as usual. haha But they have to be tamed for posting or else I would be burned at the stake. ugh!
But if you’re curious, maybe you should come a little closer and ask dominantly… I would kneel for the right questions. 😈
Send me a sample privately that you can’t post here and we’ll negotiate….
👺
Oh God! there is so much I can’t post here… can’t post anywhere… haha… I remember people thinking I was pushing things and I thought, oh no, that’s like rated G in my mind… haha…
You make me want to flog somebody!
Let me put on my stilettos and read you again. I’m getting angry down there.
Ohhh… stilettos and a flogger? You really know how to make a girl melt and tremble at the same time DK.
If my words are getting you that worked up… maybe next time, you should read them to me, with your heel pressed right against my thigh.
And if you’re angry down there… well, maybe I’ve been very naughty and need to be punished for it. 😈
How hard do you play when someone begs just right?
I’m rarely the dominant one, Kristina. Somehow my personality invites domination, though I’ve made at least one exception. I like to play hard, and I like to be played. My strings are for plucking…
xoxo
Meg
Oh Meg, I know exactly what you mean… I am the same way… but I can take the lead if it means I get to pluck your stings because you are such a hottie. haha.
Too hot to handle….great erotic piece of writing.
‘I’ll abuse myself for you’ is such a powerful and illuminating phrase and a peep hole into your mind.
Mmm… too hot to handle? You should definitely use both hands and I will tend to the burns. 🔥
And that line… “I’ll abuse myself for you” sometimes it slips out when the craving’s just too deep to hide. You caught a glimpse… but trust me, there’s so much more behind that little peephole.
Careful how close you lean in – you might find yourself addicted to the darkness. 😈
” I’ll abuse myself for you!
To feel the intense sensations
So you abuse me again…
Proving you are better at it.”
Helluva ego stroke right there!
Dope writing as always Kristina
Good to see you here
Naaj
Mmm… guilty as charged, I do love stroking the right egos… especially the ones that know how to use a firm hand.
But tell me, if that line got to you…
what would you do if I whispered it in your ear; on my knees, eyes full of need, just begging to be shown how it’s really done?
It’s so good to be seen by someone who knows how to handle heat. 😏
I said it before and I hope to say it many times more. No one does erotic like you, friend.
Mmm… you really know how to make a girl feel seen… and totally wicked too. 😏
If I’m doing it right, it’s only because I’ve got the naughtiest friends inspiring me to go there, deeper.
So keep saying it, DC; especially when I’m on my knees, pen in one hand, sinful thoughts dripping from the other. 💋
I’ll keep writing if you keep watching. Deal?
BFFs here or anywhere. You write I’ll be reading. 😁
BFFs here or anywhere. 🙂 I love that… But careful… I bite with affection. 😈
Finally you’ve posted! This piece was positively a brutal trance indeed. Bravo 👏
Finally, huh? Were you getting impatient… or just craving another taste of that brutal little spiral I want to pull you into?
A brutal trance, though? Mmm… I do love knowing my words can leave marks.
Careful… keep applauding like that, and I might just take a bow – right over your lap. haha 😈
I turn away for a minute and I miss THIS?!
Sweet Jesus is hot in here. You got these boys (and girls) sweating, flogging, sinning, doing all sorts of deliciousness. Nobody, NOBODY does erotica the way KristinaX does erotica…
Kissing in a brutal trance (I’m not the only one who adores that phrase) where everything disappears…YES, girl, you’re speaking my language. And that’s all before I get lost in your not so cold and lonely anymore🔥
Mmm, now that’s a comment that will make a girl misbehave so much harder. 😈 I love that you caught the heat, the sweat, the sin… and oh, if that had you in a trance, you definitely know we speak the same language. I write for you – for the way you feel every word, every heatwave behind them. I love that you feel no one does it like me… because it’s all meant to draw you in closer, where nothing else exists but our shared craving. Brutal kisses, delicious wickedness, and no chance of being cold or lonely; just bound by temptation and begging for more.🔥
Kristina, you rocked me into a tantric trance here. Your poem took me into the heart of a BDSM relationship that sizzles with the electric energy of being spanked, and taken forcefully and loving every minute of it. You put the heat in my manhood with your womanhood and kept me on fire with every word. Truly a fetish poem to remember on lonely nights in bed.
John
Mmm… I love knowing my words had that kind of effect on you… it makes me want to kneel at your feet and whisper every line again, slower this time, just for you. If my poem kept you on fire, imagine what I’d do with your hands on my hips and your voice telling me exactly how you want me… I’d be yours to take – aching, obedient, and desperate to please. 🔥🥀
It’s an exquisite write dear Kristina. The aching for torture brings a pleasure that knows no bounds.
Glad I’m here to witness your work as it gets deeper into the human psyche, passionate and erotic.
Mm, I knew you’d feel the sting beneath the syllables… some pleasures demand pain, and some desires deserve to be dragged out slowly, until they beg. I’m thrilled you’re watching, Wally. But be careful… the deeper you follow my words, the harder it’ll be to crawl back out. Or maybe that’s exactly what I want? 🔥
Dear, Kristine
You keep me excited and feeling alive with you sensual whisperings❣️
Mmm… I do love knowing my words linger like a whisper against your skin.
If they keep you excited and alive, just imagine what I haven’t written yet.
Careful now – I might start writing just to hear you breathe.
With a wicked little smile,
Kristina
I need to catch my breath after your beautifully sensual comment. You write and I’ll keep breathing🥰 and maybe i’ll start writing again too///I had an energy epiphany today.
Breathe all you need – I’m not done stealing the rest of those breaths yet. 😉 Pick up that pen when you’re ready and make me sweat a little.
Now, about this “energy epiphany”—color me curious. What lit you up?