Stagger, stagger, pierced by dagger.
Don’t see danger, blind with anger.
Stagger, stagger, hopeless beggar.
Want to beg her, take her, drag her.
Stagger, stagger, bleeding back here.
Everything bleaker, turning blacker.
Stagger, stagger, stick it deeper.
Beg, cry, and scream for the reaper.
This gives me a witch’s chant “Bubble Bubble toil and trouble” vibe. But darker and more intense. Nice
Thank you – That’s a very flattering comparison. I usually write more long form and less strict on rhyme, but this came out of a very intense moment where I felt very short of breath due to an emotional situation.
I’m glad and so flattered you liked it!