Sign on the door
Panties on the floor
Crawlin’ on the floor to you
Take me to the skies baby
You won’t believe your eyes baby
I wanna touch your body erotically
I can’t control myself around you
Gotta lose control with you
It’s do or die tonight
This reality baby
You want this pussy?
It’s yours
Grind into me baby
I’m losing my mind baby
I just need to lose control baby
I wanna touch your body erotically
I can’t control myself around you
Gotta lose control with you
It’s do or die tonight
Fuck me like the world’s gonna end
Let’s break the bed again
Let’s break it
Smash it
Fuck on the floor
We’ve done it before
Take me higher baby
Take me higher baby
That’s it baby
That’s it baby
That’s it
Fuck me like a wild animal
Hang on baby
It’s getting wild up in here
Can you handle me baby?
Keep fucking me like that
Just like that
Keep
Fucking
Me
Me
Yeah
Fucking me
Fucking me
Keep
Fucking
Fuck me like the world’s gonna end
Let’s break the bed again
Let’s break it
Smash it
Fuck on the floor
We’ve done it before
Take me higher baby
Take me higher baby
That’s it baby
That’s it baby
That’s it
Fucking
Fuck me like a wild animal
Hang on baby
It’s getting wild up in here
Can you handle me baby?
Keep fucking me like that
Just like that
Keep
Fucking
Keep
Fucking
My imagination runs rampant with some of your poetry…
I’ll take that as a compliment, Peter
Passionately penned, Adira. An inferno of a read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thank you, Damian
Is this your first duet? I like that concept. The music here is a little different to say the least. Trashing the furniture is exceedingly sexy, though I hope this wasn’t at a bed & breakfast. Your use of rhyme here and in the previous piece is smart and frequently unique. You’re taking advantage of internal rhyme, and I also like the dramatic delays that emphasize rhyme in your music… specifically, “I want your body – erotically”.
This piece feels a little overextended towards the end to me… a little too much music and not enough lyric, if that makes sense. The repetition in your last two pieces is excellent and professional. Some songs actually have a variety of refrains and can be quite complex. I can definitely feel your experimentation.
Another super-hot piece, girl. I can tell you like dirty talk during sex.
xoxoxo
Thanks, Meg.
No, not my first duet. I don’t do them often. Not everything I write works.
The music did end up taking over towards the end, I agree. After listening about 800 times I just decided to post. I couldn’t mix this anymore. It was exhausting.
Love me some dirty talk. How about inventing me some new words? lol. I’ve used them all and exhausted them all.
Let me work on that.
Perfect 😀
Red hot n fiery!
Thanks HJ!
I need a book to cover my front haha. Wonderfully sexy poem, friend.
Thanks Nick. I like the look of that!
Ok! This some sexy azz dirty talk. Diggin the tune and cadence. And the thumbnail.
Nice!!!
Thank you Naaj. I replied, but had no clue what I was doing. Ms. Kitten set me straight.
Sometimes I get all caught up in that dirtiness. I need to…express.
Thanks for the appreciation.
Oh-wow! I just listened to your beautiful, powerful, sexy voice – you’re rather incredible, Adira!
Thanks, girl.
You’re not so bad yourself with your sexy stories setting the site on fire.
Dirty as fuck, but goddamn this poem is fucking brilliant! Sleazy, raunchy, sweaty, full of lust and orgasmic. XXX
Wow…that’s some kind of comment Kieth. Thank you.
only for you Adira.
💋
You hold nothing back here and I love it! Just the right words for the wildness of a night to be consummated.
John
Thank you John
Fucking on the floor like wild animals… so raw this poem! Pun intended 😉
Hahaha! Thank you, Daniel
It gets like that.